1. In this passage , I would like to discuss the common topic in our life. What is the real happiness to you ? perhaps every body has your own answer about it . Let me show some information for you on the real happiness. 2. According to recent research , happiness is related to several important factors , such as family, work, health and urban design , etc. here is a link about happiness equation and tips for being happy . http://au.reachout.com/find/articles/tips-for-increasing-your-happiness#toc-looking-at-the-happiness-equation
3. First of all , work can be the one of important factors that affect our emotion and mind . Being unemployment bring a negative influence on your state of mind . especially , men , to large extend , may become depressed and anxious as result of unemployment . However, the unemployment had little impact on women’ s happiness due to the fact that women have more choice than men to stay in home or be a housewife in family.
4. Beside, spending time with family , friends is also a factor involve in happiness. Which means people who have a lot of friends or are social engaged are more likely to be happy than the people who do not. . There are three most significant person who can make you feel happy : children (77%) , friendship (76%) , spouses or partner (73%) , etc. 5. Additionally, your goodness helping for others is another source of happiness. Which means that making contribution to others would be a kind of happiness to you . In America , there are a poll given by
I heard a saying that the happy is doing something you like with the people you loved. To my opinion, I think happiness is hard to defined. Everyone has his own explaining, and in different situation, people will get different feeling from the same thing. I think happiness is changing with time, so if I can do everything I like, I will be happy.
where did you get this pictures? They are all Korean!:-) anyway, If you want to be happy,you have to think positive, or stay with someone who is really important in your life. When I work or doing something I want, and I am more happier than before. I really miss my friends.I think If I can stay with them right now, I feel better and I can do anything I have to do!!
Thank you for your information even if I do not agree with you in some point. Happiness is very important topic as you said. Comparing with what we have studied in the class about culture chock. I would say something about us as International student. All factors that you talk about in your essay is not topically what we have, we are far from our families, some of us does not have spouses, and even some of us does not do well in his/her studies. I think you have missed very important reason to be optimistic and to look to the future with open mind and accept your fate it make you happier.
I think that everyone has own resource of happiness. Now, I have two big sources of happiness. This is 4th year since I leaved my hometown and my family. That is why, I do not miss my family so much now. On the other hand, instead of family, friends are important sources of happiness for me. I feel happiness from working, too. When I succeed on working, I can feel happiness.
originally, i don't think live with parents is a thing worthy of happy. i think this is a ordinary thing,and people should go out of family to pursuit happiness.but now, when i started to live by myself, i feel lonely. ultimately, i found that parents are a happy source in my life.
oh, AJ, To answer your question, these pictures were downloaded from http://www.baidu.com/ searching website. I don't know that they are korean. I am sorry about that.
you told us several importance factors about happiness. It could help us getting happiness.However,apart from you mentioned,i think that the happiness depends on what you think happiness is. The different person has different point about happiness. As long as they think that they feel happy, that's fine. We do not need to define what happiness is on earth.
In my eyes love,family,wealth and health make us truly happy.These things are essential.But also we can be happy in other different small things,different environments has given us a different happiness.
Thanks for your composition about happiness.All the components of happiness are crucial, but I just want to say something about the relationship between it and health. We all admit that health means a lot to our happiness, but actually no one really treasure it without disease. Once we got the disease we think about the importance of health, and we miss it. What I want to say is treasure it when you have it.
Real happiness is always around us,the most important thing that is how could we find it out.We feel happy when we are with our family,friends,and our kids. Also,we still feel happy with other stuff,like Kun said music,dancing,even your own little world.However,there is no defination of happiness.
I have enjoyed many kinds of happiness since I was borned. It really means a lot to me. I love my parents, I own a happy family though I far away from them, I miss them sooo much. As you said, happiness is related to several important factors , such as family, work, health and urban design , etc. We the people who are sharing the happiness with others.
What is happiness?!It is not wishing for what you don't have but enjoy what you do possess. Happiness is a subjective feeling of oneself，a pursuit of spiritual.Everyone who is a happy experience. Different people have different views, different stages there will be a different experience. Moreover in today's rapid economic growth, people began to focus on the quality life from the interests on economic.
1. In this passage , I would like to discuss A common topic in our life. What is the real happiness to you ? Perhaps EVERYBODY has HER/HIS own answer about it . Let me show some information * on the real happiness TO YOU. 2. According to recent research , happiness is related to several important factors , such as family, work, health and urban design , etc. Here is a link TO happiness equation and tips for being happy . http://au.reachout.com/find/articles/tips-for-increasing-your-happiness#toc-looking-at-the-happiness-equation
3. First of all , work can be * one of important factors that affect our emotion and mind . Being unemployment bringS a negative influence on your state of mind . Tspecially , men , to large extend , may become depressed and anxious as A result of unemployment . However, * unemployment HAS little impact on women’ s happiness due to the fact that women have ANOTHER choice to stay AT home or be a housewife in family COMPARED TO MEN.
4. Beside, spending time with family AND friends is also a factor involveD in happiness. THIS means people who have a lot of friends or are socialLY engaged are more likely to be happy than the people who do/ ARE not. . There are three KINDS OF PEOPLE who can make you feel THE HAPPIEST : children (77%) , friendship (76%) , spouses or partner (73%) , etc. 5. Additionally, your goodness TO HELP others is another source of happiness. THIS means that making contribution to others would be a kind of happiness to you . In America , * A poll HELD by A magazine found that helping others was THE major source of happiness for 75% of THE AmericanS . So helping * others is not a troublesome thing for you but the happiness in your daily life. 6. Most importantly , health playS an important role in the source of happiness B(SMALL)ecause health is strongly tied with happiness . It is hard to be happy if you GET A pain or LIVE with illness . Thus, as long as you are healthy , you are more likely to gain happiness in life than WHEN you got sick.
7. Moreover, a HAPPY marriage can influence your feeling of happiness . iIt is a key to a happy life. A report suggestS that 43% of married women and men reported being “ very happy” whereas 24% of them said “ THE same ” . However, that happiness DOES not COME FROM kids . In fact, those coupleS without kids are as HAPPY * as those who already have children. 8. Last but not least, urban design may affect our feeling of happiness . The reason is that urban design can facilitate social interaction . For instance , forty years ago , people lived in a small yard or a house complex . They HAD many opportunities to communicate with each other and knew THE relationship of neighborhood. Nevertheless, people nowadays do not know neighbors anymore and lack * communication to each other. Hence, the happiness in life will be definitely decreased if there HAS not BEEN a good unban design for communication.
9. These several important factors above would be involved in level of happiness you might feel *. And each of them can be a component of your happy life.
10. So THIS IS all THE information about happiness . Hope you learn something new about real happiness and know how to find it out IN your daily life .
ABOUT LANGUAGE, YOU SHOULD NOT START A SENTENCE WITH "WHICH MEANS." IF YOU ARE TO USE THIS EXPRESSION, IT MUST BE USED FOLLOWING THE MAIN CLAUSE. DON'T FORGET TO CAPITALIZE THE FIRST LETTER OF A SENTENCE. ALSO PLEASE BE CAREFUL OF THE THIRD PERSON SINGULAR.
SOMEHOW, I FEEL HAPPY ALL THE TIME. I NEVER GET DEPRESSED. I DON'T KNOW WHY. I GUESS I JUST TEND TO THINK POSITIVELY.
I heard a saying that the happy is doing something you like with the people you loved. To my opinion, I think happiness is hard to defined. Everyone has his own explaining, and in different situation, people will get different feeling from the same thing. I think happiness is changing with time, so if I can do everything I like, I will be happy.
ReplyDeletewhere did you get this pictures?
ReplyDeleteThey are all Korean!:-)
anyway, If you want to be happy,you have to think positive, or stay with someone who is really important in your life.
When I work or doing something I want, and I am more happier than before.
I really miss my friends.I think If I can stay with them right now, I feel better and I can do anything I have to do!!
Thank you for your information even if I do not agree with you in some point. Happiness is very important topic as you said. Comparing with what we have studied in the class about culture chock. I would say something about us as International student. All factors that you talk about in your essay is not topically what we have, we are far from our families, some of us does not have spouses, and even some of us does not do well in his/her studies. I think you have missed very important reason to be optimistic and to look to the future with open mind and accept your fate it make you happier.
ReplyDeleteI think that everyone has own resource of happiness. Now, I have two big sources of happiness.
ReplyDeleteThis is 4th year since I leaved my hometown and my family. That is why, I do not miss my family so much now. On the other hand, instead of family, friends are important sources of happiness for me.
I feel happiness from working, too. When I succeed on working, I can feel happiness.
originally, i don't think live with parents is a thing worthy of happy. i think this is a ordinary thing,and people should go out of family to pursuit happiness.but now, when i started to live by myself, i feel lonely. ultimately, i found that parents are a happy source in my life.
ReplyDeleteoh, AJ, To answer your question, these pictures were downloaded from http://www.baidu.com/ searching website. I don't know that they are korean. I am sorry about that.
ReplyDeleteyou told us several importance factors about happiness. It could help us getting happiness.However,apart from you mentioned,i think that the happiness depends on what you think happiness is. The different person has different point about happiness. As long as they think that they feel happy, that's fine. We do not need to define what happiness is on earth.
ReplyDeleteIn my eyes love,family,wealth and health make us truly happy.These things are essential.But also we can be happy in other different small things,different environments has given us a different happiness.
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Thanks for your composition about happiness.All the components of happiness are crucial, but I just want to say something about the relationship between it and health. We all admit that health means a lot to our happiness, but actually no one really treasure it without disease. Once we got the disease we think about the importance of health, and we miss it. What I want to say is treasure it when you have it.
ReplyDeletehappiness do not only depend on children, friendship or spouse.There are lots of fact that can make you feel happy, such as music , dancing ,etx..
ReplyDeleteReal happiness is always around us,the most important thing that is how could we find it out.We feel happy when we are with our family,friends,and our kids. Also,we still feel happy with other stuff,like Kun said music,dancing,even your own little world.However,there is no defination of happiness.
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed many kinds of happiness since I was borned. It really means a lot to me. I love my parents, I own a happy family though I far away from them, I miss them sooo much. As you said, happiness is related to several important factors , such as family, work, health and urban design , etc. We the people who are sharing the happiness with others.
ReplyDeleteWhat is happiness?!It is not wishing for what you don't have but enjoy what you do possess. Happiness is a subjective feeling of oneself，a pursuit of spiritual.Everyone who is a happy experience. Different people have different views, different stages there will be a different experience. Moreover in today's rapid economic growth, people began to focus on the quality life from the interests on economic.
ReplyDelete1. In this passage , I would like to discuss A common topic in our life. What is the real happiness to you ? Perhaps EVERYBODY has HER/HIS own answer about it . Let me show some information * on the real happiness TO YOU.
ReplyDelete2. According to recent research , happiness is related to several important factors , such as family, work, health and urban design , etc. Here is a link TO happiness equation and tips for being happy . http://au.reachout.com/find/articles/tips-for-increasing-your-happiness#toc-looking-at-the-happiness-equation
3. First of all , work can be * one of important factors that affect our emotion and mind . Being unemployment bringS a negative influence on your state of mind . Tspecially , men , to large extend , may become depressed and anxious as A result of unemployment . However, * unemployment HAS little impact on women’ s happiness due to the fact that women have ANOTHER choice to stay AT home or be a housewife in family COMPARED TO MEN.
4. Beside, spending time with family AND friends is also a factor involveD in happiness. THIS means people who have a lot of friends or are socialLY engaged are more likely to be happy than the people who do/ ARE not. . There are three KINDS OF PEOPLE who can make you feel THE HAPPIEST : children (77%) , friendship (76%) , spouses or partner (73%) , etc.
5. Additionally, your goodness TO HELP others is another source of happiness. THIS means that making contribution to others would be a kind of happiness to you . In America , * A poll HELD by A magazine found that helping others was THE major source of happiness for 75% of THE AmericanS . So helping * others is not a troublesome thing for you but the happiness in your daily life.
6. Most importantly , health playS an important role in the source of happiness B(SMALL)ecause health is strongly tied with happiness . It is hard to be happy if you GET A pain or LIVE with illness . Thus, as long as you are healthy , you are more likely to gain happiness in life than WHEN you got sick.
7. Moreover, a HAPPY marriage can influence your feeling of happiness . iIt is a key to a happy life. A report suggestS that 43% of married women and men reported being “ very happy” whereas 24% of them said “ THE same ” . However, that happiness DOES not COME FROM kids . In fact, those coupleS without kids are as HAPPY * as those who already have children.
8. Last but not least, urban design may affect our feeling of happiness . The reason is that urban design can facilitate social interaction . For instance , forty years ago , people lived in a small yard or a house complex . They HAD many opportunities to communicate with each other and knew THE relationship of neighborhood. Nevertheless, people nowadays do not know neighbors anymore and lack * communication to each other. Hence, the happiness in life will be definitely decreased if there HAS not BEEN a good unban design for communication.
9. These several important factors above would be involved in level of happiness you might feel *. And each of them can be a component of your happy life.
10. So THIS IS all THE information about happiness . Hope you learn something new about real happiness and know how to find it out IN your daily life .
ABOUT LANGUAGE, YOU SHOULD NOT START A SENTENCE WITH "WHICH MEANS." IF YOU ARE TO USE THIS EXPRESSION, IT MUST BE USED FOLLOWING THE MAIN CLAUSE. DON'T FORGET TO CAPITALIZE THE FIRST LETTER OF A SENTENCE. ALSO PLEASE BE CAREFUL OF THE THIRD PERSON SINGULAR.
SOMEHOW, I FEEL HAPPY ALL THE TIME. I NEVER GET DEPRESSED. I DON'T KNOW WHY. I GUESS I JUST TEND TO THINK POSITIVELY.